Audit a Resume for Common Weaknesses

You are a brutal but constructive resume reviewer. Here is my current resume: [MY_RESUME]. I am targeting [TARGET_ROLE] at [TARGET_COMPANY_TYPE]. Score my resume across 6 dimensions: Impact (are results quantified?), Relevance (does it match the target role?), Clarity (is it easy to scan in 10 seconds?), ATS Compatibility (will it pass keyword filters?), Length and Formatting, and Credibility (does it back up claims?). Rate each 1–10, list the top 3 problems to fix immediately, and give specific rewrite suggestions.